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Its over now
Everything i was,
Everything we were,
Moved on, moved forward,
Gone nowhere at all.

Theres that place in my head,
Were my heart still smiles,
were your words never ended,
My dreams for company,
the faceless for solice.

The weak will stand for a thousand years,
while the strong around me fall,
the light that i yearned to reach,
encompassed by my own darkness,
Misery of my own making.

Whilst i may sit here waiting,
don't dream it will be for you,
i may sit here forever,
purgatory for those sin yet to commit,
Nothing left to lose.
©2007-2009 =Erishon
:iconerishon:

Author's Comments

Violent thoughts in my head, needed something to take my mind of things, so voila lol

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:iconcrimsonblack:
and here i thought you where going to take it out on the hamster. How bloodless but i do like.

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:iconerishon:
lol cheers

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:P New alien spawned
we reinvent the dawn
and no-one style compares
those neon eyes make mom and dad think that we lost our minds
they're just terrified of all new things. :P
:iconmonolith-verses:
Definitely seems like you had a lot to get off your chest. This was good. :)

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:pencil: DeviantART's Poetry and Prose Community
:iconerishon:
lol hmmm yeah i guess :s now to stop myself from goin all emo :P

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:P New alien spawned
we reinvent the dawn
and no-one style compares
those neon eyes make mom and dad think that we lost our minds
they're just terrified of all new things. :P
:iconmonolith-verses:
lol

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:pencil: DeviantART's Poetry and Prose Community
:iconfuriousfaries:
Wow, this is some powerful emotion here. I like it, I really do. I especially love,
'Theres that place in my head,
Were my heart still smiles,
were your words never ended'
Trully beautiful. I hope you write more :).

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furious?
:iconerishon:
hey thank you so much for the coment, really appreciated

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:P New alien spawned
we reinvent the dawn
and no-one style compares
those neon eyes make mom and dad think that we lost our minds
they're just terrified of all new things. :P

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